A red rose is dancing to the wind. Lke a spinning pin ,hanging into a bin. Bees are attractive all year around the red rose. ,than they don't get feb' but they get watered on the head,we can use red rose for your dinner,or date.rose are red,and they are sweet and bitter too. And when you look at it,your face will trun blue like the blue shy.I hope you enjoy this and write down one comment about this.And that will be me for now and I will see you in the next one.
Kia Ora Piri
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem you posted, half of it does sound and look like my poem that I posted but it's okay if you used it for an idea. What is your favourite flower? I saw some mistakes but I am sure you can fix them. I also suggest that your blog will get more interesting if you add a picture! Keep the blogging up. Nga Mihi
Kia ora Nia jaye.I was just useing it for a idea to make a poem.Thank you for comment.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Piripi. What an awesome Poem you got there it is very cool and interesting to read. I did a poem and it was the same starting line as well. What was your favourite part about writing this interesting poem.?
ReplyDeletekia ora Davis.writing it's and reading it.Thank you for comment.
DeleteKia Orana Piripr. Well done on completing your poem from last week. Is a good thing you've posted it here on your blog, because now we can see how creative you are. How did you find the rhyming words? My favourite flower is a rose and I'm glad you wrote about it. Keep up the amazing work Piripi.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Milika.I just sreach up rhyming word to mach with my poem.Thank you for comment.
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